Monday, November 23, 2009

argument paper

My argument paper will be written about why steroids should be legal, in sports, and recreationally, to adults.

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

template B

Various criteria’s of this car will be reviewed by my audience. One of those being the performance of the car. The performance of this car is one of the biggest reasons people are willing to spend so much money for this brand of car. When it comes to BMW they handle the best on the road, and that’s what they are known for. In my review I will rate the cars performance in handling, speed, and power. I will also go over the cars interior and exterior visual appeals. The car is very large and very luxurious. I will review its appeal inside and out, things like the seats, dash setup, and the body of the car. Another important aspect is the amenities of the car your paying so much for, so that will also be examined. Things like GPS navigation, Bluetooth, air conditioned seats, radio, and automated features. The last thing I will go over will be the safety of the car. BMW’s are known to be very safe, solid built cars. They are built with heavy frames and impact bars in the doors, and of course many airbags. They are always rated well by safety experts, which is an appeal to anyone, especially people with families. Lastly I will go over a few things about the car that I did not feel were as well as they could be. Then after reviewing the car I will compare it pricewise to a close competitors car.

Thursday, November 5, 2009

review audience

My review will be written on the luxurious 2007 BMW 750Li sedan. This review will appeal mostly to older people, generally men, who are looking for a powerful, European, luxury car that drives like no other. The BMW 7 series is a very large car, with plenty of space to comfortably fit up to five people. There is also a very spacious trunk that can easily carry anything from golf clubs to groceries. This car is very pricy though and will definitely appeal to people who are willing to spend a lot of money on their new ride. The car is more masculine and also has a very mature look to it rather than a young sporty look like the smaller 3 series. So the prospected audience for this car review would be men aging about 35 years old and above with substantial amounts of money to invest in a vehicle. The people interested will probably value things like luxury interior and exterior. They will also desire a car that performs strong, having power, a smooth ride, and has top of the line handling. This car exemplifies all of those qualities well. They will also be looking for a lot of room since this is the largest sedan made by BMW. So purchasers will probably be businessmen looking to chafer clients, or a dad looking to drive his family. They also may be looking to transport large items or large quantities of things in the trunk. They definitely value a great inside though because that is what this car is all about. Top of the line seating, as well as great speaker, navigation system, and all the nicest amenities including air-conditioned seats and a driver’s seat that massages you. Their social value would be impressing people they drive or impressing people as they arrive, both will be satisfied riding in a car like this. This would be a great businessman car, clients will be impressed, and comfortable riding with you, you cant go wrong. They should know if they were looking to stand out above the average ride on the street, turn heads, and have fun driving like they were 16 again, this would be a great investment. One thing they shouldn’t look for too much in this car is good gas mileage, it’s not terrible but this car does have an eight cylinder engine and will burn though gas quicker than a four or six cylinder car. Another thing that should be desired in a car is safety, which is very well provided in the 7 series. It’s a large car and built very well, equipped with front and side airbags, side impact bars, and warning lights for malfunctions. Overall this is a great all around car and would be loved by any driver, but would most likely be desired by the wealthy older men category.

Tuesday, November 3, 2009

review topic

I'm currently thinking of writting about the BMW 750Li, the Mitsubishi Evolution 9, or the 2007 Suzuki GSX-R